lantis Posted August 9, 2011 Report Share Posted August 9, 2011 I have only discovered this section in our forums Previous hobby that's been stopped because my other half is getting really jealous with it I've tried all sorts of photography but have never tried model photography. Did some experiments with friends, bought a load of equipment (strobes, light modifiers, triggers) and after 5-6 photoshoots got the hang of it. This one is my last though: Maybe after sometime I'll get back into it after this rep craziness in me-- photography has been a hobby that I keep coming back into Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest ThePhilosopher Posted August 9, 2011 Report Share Posted August 9, 2011 I love the styling and overall look to these; however, they all seem to be a touch too hot in the brightest highlights. In the third image the stray hair at the back of her head is distracting. In the fourth image the hair/dirt on the coat is distracting (near your watermark) as well as the (un)folding of the coat near her breast. Keep 'em coming -that's the worst I could do and that's being nitpicky. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lantis Posted August 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2011 I love the styling and overall look to these; however, they all seem to be a touch too hot in the brightest highlights. In the third image the stray hair at the back of her head is distracting. In the fourth image the hair/dirt on the coat is distracting (near your watermark) as well as the (un)folding of the coat near her breast. Keep 'em coming -that's the worst I could do and that's being nitpicky. Thanks! I enjoy these nitpicky critiques when I was frequenting MM forums There's still some improvements to do which a hobbyist photographer like me only realizes after the shoot, like introducing a hairlight for more separation. In photography I always believe in learning by experience. I may have a problem with distinguishing too hot a highlight-- I intentionally want them bright, but not too bright. I calibrated my monitor with Spyder, I may have problems with my eyes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bones Posted August 9, 2011 Report Share Posted August 9, 2011 No wonder the missus was getting jealous! Mine would too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hiker01 Posted August 9, 2011 Report Share Posted August 9, 2011 What hair? ....and I'm not distracted by....."as well as the (un)folding of the coat near her breast.". I think it has to be pulled up slightly to focus one's eyes to the curvature of the lines and bring it into the proper perspective........... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lantis Posted August 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2011 No wonder the missus was getting jealous! Mine would too hahaha she was ok with the other ladies but this girl takes the cake-- wifey is a bit insecure with her boobies What hair? ....and I'm not distracted by....."as well as the (un)folding of the coat near her breast.". I think it has to be pulled up slightly to focus one's eyes to the curvature of the lines and bring it into the proper perspective........... true, true! Well Hike, you missed THAT shot, ImageShack was quick on removing it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest ThePhilosopher Posted August 9, 2011 Report Share Posted August 9, 2011 No, that shot is still up - I'm just distracted it's not lying smoothly on her breast. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JeanePittman Posted September 22, 2012 Report Share Posted September 22, 2012 the hair/dirt on the coat is distracting (near your watermark) as well as the (un)folding of the coat near her breast. Keep 'em coming -that's the worst I could do and that's being nitpicky. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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