Thanks! I enjoy these nitpicky critiques when I was frequenting MM forums There's still some improvements to do which a hobbyist photographer like me only realizes after the shoot, like introducing a hairlight for more separation. In photography I always believe in learning by experience.
I may have a problem with distinguishing too hot a highlight-- I intentionally want them bright, but not too bright. I calibrated my monitor with Spyder, I may have problems with my eyes