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It is more of a 'feeling'. Like analog music from a tube amp -vs- a MP3 on a iPod.
Take your Bamboo sketch for example.
The growth rings are all very much the same, as are the leafs. The leafs might as well be copy-n-pasted. Don't get me wrong it is a good drawing, and most people wish they could sit down and draw that. It does look a little more "Comic Book / Cartoon" bound, than organic lifelike. Which is fine if that is "your style". This is where "Art" gets subjective.
Organic, no two leafs are identical. Again, personal preference.
Ahhh, yes, I see what you mean, and yes, the reeds were essentially copy/pasted as I just drew up a few basic shapes, then traced and repeated them to get the effect I was looking for
If you ignore the reed which the cobra coils round, the other three reeds follow the traditional rules of ikebana
When it comes to doing the actual tattoo, there will be more 'weathering' added to the reeds and leaves so they're not all perfect copies of each other
Side note, are you trying to spell Komatori with your Hiragana? English for Robin?
Yes, my godson's name is Robin, but I chose to use the actual Japanese word, rather than simply trying to write 'robin' in katakana
The other bamboo reeds are reserved for the names of my own children when we have them
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This has been interesting.
Our member asks for some honest critique.
Our member gets some pretty brutally honest critique.
Our member apparently appreciates the honesty he asked for.
Personally, I don't know squat about tattoos, but it's nice to be with a group who can talk to each other like family.
For my part, I'll just offer one comment about the wife - more specifically, a comment about the previously offered comment about the wife. I think most women I've known who would go for a tattoo like that would be much more satisfied with their husband's best work (assuming it is decent) than a masterful job by a professional artist. Considering the way that you take brutal honesty and criticism (and the fact that she undoubtedly knows how you are), I'd just see what she says and accept whatever she says as heartfelt.
Good luck with this hobby, or vocation, whichever it turns out to be.
Bill
Many thanks, Bill, I am hoping to be able to learn and progress to the point where I can make a career tattooing, although I do appreciate that at the moment, I am at the bottom of the totem pole
Also, you're quite right about what most women would think about their husband's work, my wife was actually really upset by Dave's comment as she understands that the condition of her sleeve is currently little more than a sketch, which will be refined in the future into a finished piece, and that it was simply a matter of getting all lines down (albeit crudely) rather than having to re-draw or re-stencil in the future
And absolutely, we are all family here, which is why I knew I could trust people to be honest, rather than just telling me what they thought I wanted to hear
That's what I need to hear to continue to learn and improve
I forgot to post this pic before, but it's another tattoo I re-worked, which was not only badly faded, but very badly executed...
The S was higher than the top of the original banner line, so I had to re-draw that, and then used the blue ink and shading to hide all the blurring
But, even more disturbing than the positioning of the S, the lady told me that when it was done, the tattoo artist not only made her stand for the application of the stencil (totally normal) but made her stand for the procedure as well
I just found it hard to imagine any artist thinking that was an acceptable way to tattoo someone, as if they were to come over light-headed, as can happen, well, the possibilities don't really bear thinking about
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Hey Ronin, are you familiar with Kore Flatmo? His work is the best I've ever seen.
Not a name I was familiar with, but I really like his work. His Japanese work reminds me of work by Horiyoshi III
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Your work is far better from other tattos i have seen!
Tattos Is NOT my thing, to me all tattos or other things that you put or nail on your body is ugly! Call me old school but i cant see the love for doing that to your body.
But as for the drawings i like them
Thanks, that's nice to hear, it can be shocking to see the level of work people do walk around with, but I at least accept that I am just learning
I do understand that tattoos aren't everyone's cup of tea, when I was younger I swore I'd never get one, and if I drew on myself, I would immediately rub it off again
Ironically, I still can't stand to have ink marks on me, and still rub off smudges etc, yet am perfectly happy having permanent tattoos
I have been drawing much longer than I have been tattooing
unfortunally they do look very amateur....your Nautical star looks way of the mark compared to the one below .
Of course they look amateur, I am still learning the ropes
How long had the artist who did that star been working for? The one you have compared it to, was probably the fifth or sixth tattoo I had ever done
You have an eye for it, just grab some pig skins and practise practise practise. I really like the art too
Many thanks
I can only get better at it
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To be honest (since you want it),looks terrible to me. I would think the lack of replies last time would be your answer to that one.
What kind of woman would want that on them i have no idea,but thats another issue.
That kind of stuff is for good and i really wouldn't want a rookie using my skin for practice,i know everyone has to get started at some point but if you are using my skin as a drawing board,you better know what you are doing.
Thanks for the comments, I'm not above hearing my work is bad, after all, I am still learning
From your comment though, I do wonder if you're someone who doesn't really appreciate tattoos at all...
Known you a long time so I say this with affection...you are not ready for prime time yet. Or at a minimum make sure whoever you are doing knows exactly what your capabilities are. This is coming from someone who can't decide what to have for breakfast never mind how he would like to permanently mark his body.
I wasn't planning on opening my own studio just yet, still getting in as much practice as I can
dont you guys literally practice on pigs first since their skin is almost identical, or is that a myth?
Pigskin is one parctice medium available, and there are also rubber practice 'skins' available too, but, reading on tattoo forums, people say that folks who train on the practice skins can wind up over-working human skin, because the rubber is much harder to work, so the person develops a 'heavy hand'. Likewise, it is also possible to practice on grapefruits, but as the opposite, the skin on those is too soft... The only true medium for practice, is one's own skin, and the skin of willing victims/volunteers
Most (if not all) artists learn by tattooing their own legs
Gotta agree with the above two posts. I'd suggest having your wife go to an experienced tattoo artist to fix up that sleeve.
Anyhow, here's my personal favorite local tattoo artist's work for comparison:
There's some fantastic work there, how long have they been in the industry for? Really nice portrait work
Your wife might not be brutally honest to your face about her opinion of the sleeve, but she will see it everyday for the rest of her life. You don't want a less than perfect reminder of you staring her in the face everyday- so I agree with chief. Get it worked over by the best person you can.
You have skills, but I wouldn't let you tattoo me. You haven't been at this very long, what do you really expect?
I'm sorry T, I am only doing for you what you asked, and I would want the truth, too.
Nothing to apologize for, the truth was what I wanted. The funny thing, is she is really happy with it (and has had the work complimented by others) but as mentioned above, that was never intended as anything more than a rough outline to be refined in the future
And absolutely, I'm not expecting miracles, afterall, it takes time to master any new medium
As someone with some ink, and friend of 3 working Tattoo Artists-- it is not horrible, but it does show a little lack of experience IMHO. Clearly still in the apprentice stage. ???
Let me give perhaps some constructive criticism.
*The above photos look very digital or mono to me. To be more specific, the lines look traced/too precise and all the same width.
*Shading (on colored pieces). Consider light source. Imagine a real life flower/anchor/etc, then visualize how light would reflect across it, and from where it would be shining from.
**Shading -- I simply can not stress this enough. Shading is mastery. It is perhaps the first thing I look at when 'judging' a tattoo. A sign of quality. Even an all black tattoo can be blended/feathered in. Use different gauge needles, and colors.
Your Lotus Flower looks like you used 2 colors (could be monitor/photo) and simply varied intensity -vs- 3, 4, 5 colors blending together.
Here is a Lotus Flower with some nice blending and shading:
This flower has what looks like Red, Orange, Yellow, Purple and base flesh + black? outline
Incomplete, but--
Similar here, the dark bottoms of the petal where light would not get down to; black, purple, yellow, orange. Notice how round one of shading the scales takes into consideration how light would reflect-- tail higher toward imaginary light source, and possibly the head as it would arch up.
Study, Study, Study, Practice, Practice, Practice. Rome was not built in a day.
Thanks for the feedback, it's much appreciated, and yes, I'm very much still in the apprentice stage
Yes, the lotus was a two color piece, and yes, it does look very 'printed', but it was supposed to be a stylized piece, rather than a photo-realistic one
Your comment on the line work really confuses me though, as I would have thought precision and consistency of the lines, is one of the key principles of a well applied tattoo... I know the lines on my wife's sleeve are all over the place in terms of consistency, but, in my defense, she is a nightmare to tattoo: fidgets, complains about the pain etc, so it was a case of getting all the lines of the stencil inked as quickly as possible, even if only sketchily, so they could be refined in the future, rather than doing a perfect piece in one go
As you say, these things do take time to get to grips with, and all I can do is keep practicing
Thanks to all for the feedback, it is very much appreciated
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As you may recal, I've recently started to learn how to tattoo. I've tried posting work to a tattoo forum to get feedback, but despite a load of views, no-one's said anything
Now, if my work's bad, I'd rather be told what I'm doing wrong and how to improve than just silence, so please chime in with any feedback, positive or negative
Self-applied Cherry blossom (my first time tattooing anything)
Second tattoo performed:
Lotus (first time using color to outline and shading)
Self-applied Hibiscus flowers (wife stretched the skin for me, and yes, she was wearing gloves too...)
Nautical star (skin condition is psoriasis)
Re-touching of self-applied cherry blossoms (while lying down)
Memorial anchor (shading has healed up really nicely)
Re-worked old tattoo (on someone else's ass, not mine
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Minimalist Portrait (still healing)
Bamboo and Cobra stencil:
Marlin stencil:
Frog-San:
Chest stencils:
Japanese Sleeve on wifey (two and a half hours work). Lines are going to be 2nd passed and refined when shading and color is added
Done on a friend of a friend:
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Excellent first results, keep going, they'll be awesome
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Congratulations indeed, I hope everything's going well
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It was a gift from his mother so I guess emotionally he will be pretty attached to wearing it for the rest of his life.
Perfect reason to keep wearing it
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Really sorry to see someone treated in such a manner, I hope you can get a resolution, and indeed, definitely see if Andy can fix things.
This isn't normally my style, but given the situation, I think Nikos wants banning from all forums. To suggest that he could get a new case from his supplier, makes me think he's trying to be a re-seller, not a genuine collector, and to pack items in such an unacceptable way, just shows such a total lack of respect for the buyer, it is, well, not exactly a 'scam', as goods were received, but still in that same mindset... Someone like that brings nothing to our community
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Classy
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Looking good
I would suggest removing the 'back strap' though, that way, the metal loop doesn't break the line of the stripes, and also brings it closer to the original Tudor NATO
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Very nice restoration
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I expect he'll still wear the SMP, he doesn't strike me as someone who bothers changing watches. Ever.
On my wedding day, I wore this awesome gift from Nikki6 (never been able to take a pic which does it justice, but this one was taken on the day)
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Absolutely love it
That project is a must
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This is, IMHO, the absolute truth.
You may not know this, but Rolex has been the subject of governmental action here for years regarding the way they fix prices.
They sell I really fine $500-1000 USD watch, but they control prices to a ridiculous extent.
Buy the top quality rep - the quality without the price fixing.
Bill
Wow, I didn't know that Rolex had actually been taken to task over their pricing, that is awesome to hear
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Welcome, and indeed, the information above is spot on accurate
I can understand that you want to treat yourself to a nice watch, I've been in the same situation myself in the past, but held off on the purchase, and since got into replicas. My honest belief is that a replica will provide you with just as much pleasure as 'the real thing', but at a fraction of the cost (and spending X amount on a genuine watch may even leave you with buyers remorse...). Most folks assume that Rolex = Fake, even if you are wearing 'the real thing', so why blow that much money, just to be asked "Is that a fake?"?
Following the advice here will get you the watch you want, at a price you'll like
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Looking good, my man, I've gotta get one of those for mine
With regards the springbars, if you ever plan on replacing the bracelet, do not throw those springbars. Might just be my own experience, but I found replacing the bracelet to be harder than any other watch I've owned, and requires the bars to flex quite a bit to slot home in the lugs.
On a side note about the NATO, if you want to get it more accurate to the Tudor-supplied NATO, you'll need to remove the short 'back strap', but of course, that's a personal preference
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Wow...nice job on the buffing. Really gave it an added demension.
I don't buff my nails so I don't know anything about buffers. But I am assuming there are 4 different grains/grits/different on each side of the nail buffer. Not wanting to cause unnecessary harm to the bracelet...which courseness did you start with...?
Thanks
They're a useful piece of equipment to have for re-finishing polished surfaces
Some are sold as foam blocks, some are sold more like a double-sided nail file, but they all do the same thing (and also tend to have foam backing to prevent excessive pressure) You'll be able to get one in any cosmetics department or dollar store, or failing that, swipe one from your wife's cosmetics bag
They are normally numbered on the surfaces, so simply start with Side One, and work round to Side Four. You're probably looking at maybe 5-10 minutes buffing with each surface, but the results are well worth it
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You're a call it like you see it guy - did I do something wrong here?
Bill
Nothing wrong whatsoever from where I'm sitting
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If I am reading the story correctly (and it is a big if), you wrote to a seller telling him you will pay more. Why? because you are hoping the seller is dishonest and greedy enough to hit your bid and screw the original buyer. Congratulations, you found a dishonest guy - success from your perspective. He is the scammer and you got what you want. So I don't think you have an ethical dilemma. You long since passed that. This is only coming up for fear of repercussions to you since it may come out on the forums. Bet you didn't hear that from anyone else.
In fairness, many people act this way so you are not alone. I have been on the other end of one of those situations although I did not lose my money. It was a larger item and my lawyer advised going after the original seller (money had passed so a legal transaction had taken place) which I did and then informing the new buyer that he was in possession of stolen property and requesting it back which I didn't. I settled for getting my money back.
And of course the seller is ultimately the scammer.
I read it as Buyer B asking if the seller had another movement for sale, and was willing to pay for it. Instead of Seller saying "No, I have only got the one" or "I can get hold of one for you" they instead sold the only movement they had at the higher price to Buyer B, leaving Buyer A hanging with his cheese in the wind... (never had the chance to use that expression till now, thankyou, John Hughes
) Not fair on Buyer A, but not Buyer B's fault... As with when I tried on the GMTIIc, the AD should never have offered me the option to purchase it, they should have honored their reservation with their original client...
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Yes I agree but I am just almost never in a context that will allow me for me a 50+ watch
Situations calling for such a watch don't often come up in day to day life
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I certainly wouldn't feel good about it, that's for sure... That said, that is how some people do business... A while back when I tried on the gen GMTIIc, the AD had said that it was reserved for someone, but I could still examine it. While I was trying it on, they said that if I wanted it and had the cash, I could buy it that day... (so much for the guy it was reserved for
) Obviously I didn't (and wouldn't) but it does go to show that some businesses are just out to get the money, with no thought of personal ethics...
Honest feedback required
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That's cool, afterall, everything's personal preference![:)](https://rwg.cc/datastore/emoticons/emoticons/default_smile.png)
Many thanks, and when the day comes, I'll be sure to be as equally honest
I've been drawing just over 20 years, and people have been saying I should tattoo for a good ten years, it's just until now, I was too worried about making a mistake to actually consider doing it. It wasn't until I lumed the dial of my 1655 that I had the confidence to even consider tattooing. I've been lucky, in that I have a friend online who is a tattoo artist, and they've been giving me a lot of advice and encouragement, as proper apprenticeships are hard enough to find in most places, and in this town, a total impossibility due to none of the studios wanting to take on apprentices. Sadly, the mentality seems to be "who wants to train someone who can then take away your business?" When what people seem to forget, is that it's not just a case of everyone cutting themself a piece of the pie, but that there is a never-ending supply of pie, so there's room for everyone to get into it and still be enough work to go round
Luckily for me, I've spent the better part of the last 10 years in various tattoo studios, and picked up most of the information which apprentices learn, it's just a matter of actually putting that knowledge into practice and doing it ![:)](https://rwg.cc/datastore/emoticons/emoticons/default_smile.png)