It is late, so I will keep this brief -
The movement & dial look good. A gen dial would be an obvious improvement over the rep dial, but the cost vs benefit lines are very skewed due to the high cost of gen Daytona dials.
You are correct that the case etching is the wrong type (it should be engraved instead of laser-etched), but since the space between the lugs will be hidden beneath the bracelet's end links, I would not worry too much about that. Anyone with enough knowledge to ID the lug etching as incorrect will likely be equally suspicious of finding no engraving at all, so I would go with the etched case which looks better than no etching at all.
The only item that really bothers me is the bezel, which just looks off. All of the fonts look a bit small & are just slightly incorrect. But the glaring problem is the spacing (too wide) of the numbers that make up the '110'. If you compare the spacing of the other 3-digit numbers on the bezel to the 110, you will see what I mean. The 1 1 0 should be closer together. Previously, DW's steel bezels got this right (all of the black plastic aftermarket bezels I have seen, including DW's, have the '110' spaced as you see it here), but this 1 is wrong. I guess DW must have switched suppliers for his bezels since the last 1 I got from him (last year). This is too bad since someone else just asked me about Daytona bezels & I told them to contact DW. I may have to rescind that recommendation for the time being.
Otherwise, good luck to you & your watchmaker.