Now that I've had a chance to view it on a larger screen, I really like what you've done.
The case looks really good to me. Rehaut depth looks shallow, which is a good thing. The lugs and CG could be a little bloated. The CG could use a little thinning. Lug holes look great to me. Honestly, I wouldn't really change much other than a small amount of reshaping on the CG.
In spite of it's innaccuracy, I really like the AR'd cyclops! Basically it looks like a nicely serviced 16800 to me.
Only other suggestion I have is with regards to the hands. Definitely DO NOT relume them!!! If I were you I would try and find a nice set of gen lumi hands and either have them relumed to match that gorgeous patina on the dial, or try and find a set that have already aged and match the patina. I would sell the Tritium hands (or hang on to them for a more vintage project). Just my 0.02