Thanks. You might want to look at the minute hand too. You'll notice the lume fill area is pointed rather than squared off. They sell ETA sword hand sets at Helenarou: http://www.helenarou.com/5517-milsub-super-lume-watch-hands-correct-sec-tip-for-e551728242836.html
Sounds like a good spec. Here's an update of mine. I used an Ingod dial in the end. However, don't think he's in business anymore. So you're probably better off going with a Yuki. I also went for a Michael Young T19 crystal rather than a Clark. You might want to consider an Athaya 702 crown and tube set rather than a gen.
As well as shaping the crown guards. I generally lower the height of the saddle between them ever so slightly. Countersink and re-tap the hole, then add an Athaya crown and tube. Naturally, I try and avoid taking anything off the top of crown guards. Not perfect, but close enough for me without the outlay of a phong case.